WWWPerathor Photography: you have provided a resonably confident description of the artists work. EBI: Explain in what way the artist has inspired you to create out of place photography.
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Really exciting contextual references and initial tests!! Very impressive. Very clear link between your own and others work. To improve: Try to include at least 20 images per shoot , select 3 for further refinements/editing in Photoshop.
Current grade: D (39) Some good exploration of ideas, although these are not very clear as you have not completed an initial mindmap. Make sure you complete all elements of the coursework (listed above).
i will make a mind map for my book so that i can show the ideas that i had and i will add the elments of the course work.I also think that the brightness of the images was slightly corrupted by the printer in my bood however they look better on the computer. A very limiting start to your project. You have started to analyse Pearblossom Highway. To improve, you should outline ideas through mindmapping and support your ideas with moodboards. Critical analysis is also essential and should be completed urgently.
cg;1-u feedback on the photography assesment page... .to improve i will make a popplet explaining my ideas for joiners such as how i will take them,what i will take them off and were i will take them.I also will make a mood board of examples of work that inspire my ides. what can i do to improve my work....
to improve my work i can explain why on my alphabet project i went from random objects to hands.In the future i need to crop my images more so that its purely focused on the main focus e.g the letters.I need to do slightly more research on some of the topics that im basing my photos on some more things i need to include are a moldboard,mind maps,outcomes, Edward Weston,miniature worlds,space and shape. This term i have worked on miniature worlds and really developed my skills in focusing the camera on smaller scenes and working on the angles which are best to make things stand out.The miniature worlds project was inspired by Carl Warner a successful photographer that builds scenes made of different foods,I practiced this technique on one of my miniature worlds shoot , we used a combination of fruits, vegetables and sweets.I think this project really helped me develop certain skills.
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